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Every student can benefit from engaging in some extracurricular activity, especially from activities concerning group work. Through group work, such as playing an instrument in a orchestra, you can learn how to work harmoniously with others. In order to complete a group work well, you have to cooperate with others, and you would be able to cooperate with others more easily after doing a group work. Also, you are able to upgrade your skills by working with others. For instance, if you attend a photography class with diverse people who are good at different areas, you will be able to learn some skills from them and also give them some feedback, thereby increasing your ability. Moreover, you can broaden your circle of friends by doing group activity. Extracurricular activity is an excellent chance to make friends outside your school and broaden your perspective. In conclusion, extracurricular activities, especially ones with group work provide you excellent benefits, such as learning to cooperate, upgrading one's ability and to make outside friends.